Sunday, September 5, 2010

Revised yet again, synopsis of Forever Mine

Tell me why I can sit and write chapter after chapter but ask me to write a blurb and I sit and curse forever! Anyway here it is! Lemme know what ya'll think? Okay third time is the charm! lol

Seventeen-year old Sarah’s life is turned upside down when her single mom is sent to jail. She’s forced to move, leaving behind everything she’s ever known, including her best friend Sydney. Lost and bitter in a new school, her only goal is to save money and move back home. Then she meets Angel Moreno.

Enigmatic but gorgeous, Angel is almost too good to be true. Except for one thing, his archaic belief that guys and girls can never be “just friends”. The problem? Sarah’s best friend Sydney is not a girl.

With their unexpected romance intensifying to places neither ever experienced, how long can Sarah keep Angel in the dark? And how will he react when the truth finally comes out?


  1. I have problems writing synopses and blurbs because I always have too much to say! It's hard to winnow it down. I think you're doing great... Hard to go wrong with gorgeous, enigmatic men ;)

  2. >Before she knows it her secret has caught [HER] in a web of lies she can't undo.

  3. Thanks will edit! Yep Jessa I swear synopsis are the death of me. I'm still not completely happy with it but will have to do for now. Sorry guy's that it took me so long to respond. I've been so into writing the second in the series. I've been neglecting certain things, like my blog and promoting FM. Thanks for your input!