Disclaimer: Parts of this are subject to change as the story has not been finalized and I tend to obsess during rewrites. AND once again. I didn't get this to my editor on time so this is unedited!
Set up: Extremely shy Charlie is being harassed by a few pot smoking jerks as she waits just outside the near empty university for her ride from:
His friends began laughing
now too as if she’d just said something hilarious. “Okay okay,” he said a
little too amused. “Don’t go. I haven’t introduced myself. I’m Ross and this
must be your first year here right? Because I know I would’ve noticed a
beautiful thing like you before.”
“Yep,” she said
feeling her face warm from the compliment. “First year.” She flung her bag over
her shoulder just as he lifted his hand toward her.
“That hair wow.
It’s… so bright. ”
Charlee cursed her
bright head. Her entire life all she
wanted was to go unnoticed—blend in with everything but this hair had and would
always be the bane of her existence. Even after Drew’s plan to make it less noticeable she still
may as well sit there screaming “Look at me! My heads on fire!”
She smiled faintly
and tried making her way around Ross.
“Wait, wait.” He
stepped in front of her and stared at her hair with an almost perverted
expression. “Are you red everywhere,
Charlee?” he murmured but loud enough for his friends to hear because they
burst out laughing and were already falling all over each other.
Her face was
instantly ablaze and she looked away.
“Can I touch it?”
he asked.
With a jerk of her
neck she was facing him again. “What?” She stepped back away from him.
He took a step
forward with a sardonic smile that made the hair on the back of her neck stand.
“I meant the hair on your head not on…”
“No you can’t,”
she gasped glancing around wishing to God she’d spot Drew’s car in the parking
lot somewhere. “I gotta go.”
His friends
laughed even more now. “Burn!” One of them said covering his mouth because her
having to go was apparently side-splitting.
Ross didn’t seem
quite as amused as they were now but he still managed to smirk. “C’mon, red,” his
hand toward her again. “I just wanna see if it feels as soft as it looks.”
“Sorry, I gotta go,”
she repeated.
She started to
walk around him beginning to feel a little nervous about how deserted the
campus suddenly felt. This wasn’t unusual for a late Friday afternoon and
normally she wouldn’t care but being alone here with these three obviously high
guys was really starting to unnerve her.
His hand touching
her made her gasp again. Ross held her arm as she tried going around him. “I’m
asking nicely.” His voice was low and deliberate now.
Charlee tried to
shake his arm off her but he held it firmly.
“Let her go.”
They all looked up
at once and Ross immediately laughed. A heavyset boy she recognized quickly as
Walter, a guy on both her chess teams stood there looking a bit unsure of
himself but he cleared his throat and spoke even louder the second time. “I
said let her go.”
Ross dropped her
arm and took a few steps toward Walter. “You’re gonna tell me what to do, fat boy?”
The voice in
Charlee’s head screamed for her to get out of there. She was free to run now
but she couldn’t. She couldn’t just leave Walter there with these three pothead
assholes.
“J-just let her be
is all I’m saying.” Walter looked about
as scared as Charlee felt.
“Yeah? Or what?”
Ross asked taking a few more steps toward Walter. “What are you gonna do fat
ass?”
“Let’s go,
Walter.” Charlee said walking toward him but Ross stopped her grabbing her arm
again.
“I said let her
go!” Walter pushed Ross making him tumble back off balance for a second but he
recovered quickly and swung landing his fist solidly on Walter’s nose.
In the next few
seconds while Walter brought his hands to his bloodied nose Ross swung at him
again. Charlee screamed at him to stop when she saw Walter lose his footing and
tumble to the ground in pain. Ross began kicking him in the stomach and chest
and his friends joined him, kicking Walter merciless. Completely panic stricken
now and terrified that they were going to kill him especially when she saw one
of Ross’s kicks go for Walter’s head, Charlee begged them to stop. She thought for sure security or someone
would’ve come by now but unbelievable there was no one around and that’s when she
saw him.
Out of nowhere a
guy ran up to Ross and with one swift powerful punch to the face he knocked him
out cold. Charlee was too stunned to move even when Ross’s body dropped
lifeless at her feet. He never even knew what hit him.
“You okay,
Walter?” The deep resonate sound of his voice barely registered as she finally
pulled her eyes away from the body lying at her feet. Looking up she watched
the mystery guy bend over at Walter’s side. Ross’s friends were long gone
running the moment they saw Ross drop like a sack of rocks. The guy hadn’t
bothered going after them too concerned about Walter instead.
Mesmerized she now
couldn’t take her eyes off him as he
lifted Walter’s big body effortlessly, helping him to his feet.
Charlee hadn’t
even noticed Drew had driven up until she honked. Coming out of her daze she
turned to Drew stepping away from Ross’s body and lifted her hand at Drew to
give her a second. “Are you okay, Walter?”
Walter nodded but
looked away. He seemed upset or maybe just embarrassed. “Are you sure? I can
ask my friend to take you to the emergency room if you want. We can also call
the cops.” She turned to Ross who was still lying on the floor but appeared to
be coming to. “We can try and keep him here until the cops come.”
“He ain’t going anywhere.”
The guy assured her with a lift of an eyebrow.
Her eyes met with
the guy’s intensely serious eyes for a moment. She’d never seen such heavy
lashes on a guy in her life and she was having an awfully hard time keeping her
eyes off his big arms. Looking at his face now she could see he was probably
her age but he had the body of a man—a full grown amazingly built man. With his toned arms and shoulders alone, add
to that his more than confident demeanor, he was a complete contrast to Walter
who stood there still spitting out blood.
“I’m good.” Walter
said after wiping the blood away from his nose again.
Drew honked again.
Charlee knew she was in a hurry but she felt terrible about just leaving Walter
there.
“Go ahead.” Walter
said already starting to walk away. “I’m fine really.”
She hurried to him
before he could get too far and gave him a quick hug. “Thank you. I’m so sorry
this happened.”
Walter nodded and
gave her a small smile. “It wasn’t your fault. Don’t worry about it.”
Of course Charlee
felt entirely to blame but she wouldn’t argue with him. She glanced at the guy
who’d really saved the day suddenly incredibly grateful that he’d showed up
when he did but dare not attempt to even ask his name much less hug him.
Instead she smiled softly. “Thank you, too.”
He winked at her the
intensity suddenly gone then flashed one of the most breathtaking smile she’d
ever seen. In an effort to not become completely mesmerized again and make a
fool of herself she glanced away from his lips and his near perfect teeth.
Instead she focused on the skin on his big arms. Being so pasty white, her
entire life she’d envied people with skin like his so perfectly tanned. She
felt almost ashamed that any thoughts about Walter’s well being had been
completely snuffed by visions of touching this incredible guy’s skin.
Another honk from
Drew yanked her out of said visions and she turned to Drew then waved back at
Walter one last time. “I’ll see you next week.”
Can y'all guess who this mystery guy is? ;) Happy New Years everyone! I hope you enjoyed!!
Add to your GoodReads "to read" shelf now!
Oh I can guess who the mystery man is!!!! Thank you for posting this tonight! Totally just completed 2012!! Bring on 2013 and more of your awesome books!@!!!@!@@E$@#R#
ReplyDeleteI love it ;-)
ReplyDeleteMelanie
Thank you! You just made my night better!!!
ReplyDeleteOh what a tease! Yes I can guess who he is but would have liked a little bit more. Anyway great to read this on the last day of 2012. Happy new year...and please hurry we have to read Hector soon...can't wait. :D
ReplyDeleteWhen will this book be released? I thought it was coming out today and Im excited to read it.
ReplyDeleteSorry about the confusion. No I've never given a release date. My hope is that this will be out EARLY 2013. But I have no actual date yet. I will however make announcements as soon as I think I'm VERY close! Thanks for the interest and enthusiasm! <3 =)
DeleteWow, Reyes! I love redheads!! Being a of Mexican decent, I can totally get Charlee's facination with people of skin-tones different from our own..lol..So glad she's a ginger and pasty!! Looking forward to many great works from you this year, based on your last one's you won't dissapoint the fans!! xoxo
ReplyDeletePlease hurry. I'm going through withdrawl here! And I REALLY can't wait for Abel's story. Really any of your stories will do.
ReplyDeleteI want more. Lol. im so excited to read Hector's story.
ReplyDeleteI agree with KD!!
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